Oh, Ow!
How sharp the share that plows
soul soil;
affliction tills in rows,
that I may plant
sweet seeds of hope
in heart new-softened now.
Another sower also knows
the power of the pain,
and whether I allow
or no, he casts in doubt
which quickly grows.
endow
harrow
vow
low
allow
throw
follow
owe
Edit, comment, add! Fix up the second stanza!
Oh Julia, the second stanza doesn't need any fixing up! I love it! But I want a third stanza, not just a list of words! The second stanza leaves me without resolution. Is a third stanza coming?
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